Riveet099's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Scrap Memories - Chapter One]

Very nice. I loved the whole Pokemon Mystery playstyle

BigBossErndog responds:

Thank you! :D

[ZS Dead Detective - Pumpkin Head]

It's a nice closure. Finished the game twice, and the medals didn't unlock.

Muja responds:

Thank you a lot and, about the medals... Could you send me a PM and tell me which device and browser you're using? Though I doubt it's a code issue, try to go to the main menu once again and see if they unlock

[DroworD]

As I see it, this is a very original mechanic game. The first avatar is 10 words, and I got 11... but even after two refreshes the medal won't unlock?

HealliesGames responds:

Thank you, Riveet!
I saw now it's unlocked. When you refresh the page, wait the splash screen and stay a bit in the menu. :)

[Paristroyer]

Simple and fun, just gotta get used to no omnidirectional shots... The Hit the Books medal may be malfunctioning? The last person to get it was three weeks ago and it is such a simple medal

ninjamuffin99 responds:

HMMM that is very suspicious.

[SHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO]

It's an... original concept. Is it normal for the game to suddenly start lagging as you get to higher numbers?

ninjamuffin99 responds:

Sadly it is normal for that to happen. I gotta optimize it sometime soon

[Shamaniac]

Really great game. (*SPOLIER*: The first time I played I was able to get the fire spirit but the second time, I couldn't get the rock with a symbol to lift the caterpillar up? My wand doesn't light up or anything and I can't click or drag it so I remain stuck.)

CrounchyBrothers responds:

Thank you.
I think the problem with the raising stone appears because your browser is not at 100% zoom. ;-)

[ZS Dead Detective vs Nine Deaths Cat]

Delightful addition to this awesome series

Muja responds:

Thank you a lot!

[Zombie Cannon Attack!]

Might be a problem only I'm having, but whenever I click off-screen during the game, the whole thing freezes.

RubbleGames responds:

Thanks for the feedback, it's not just you. I'm looking into it but it doesn't happen on my site, only on Newgrounds. If you switch to a different tab and back it should unfreeze.

[Phantom Reverse #4]

The main character isn't exactly easy to connect with so I can be happy when Julius breaks his teeth a bit. The speech choices and the way they are said make him seem like the real dick here. Julius bursts into tears and sputters a bit too quick. The story central plot is okay, but the pacing of the characters is a little strange to me.

JackAstral responds:

I definitely agree with that - I didn't sneak in enough characterization for him yet. Episode 5 starts with a flash back showing how Melonie and him became friends, so hopefully that adds a little bit. The idea is he's suppose to be really guilt ridden and scared because of something that happened in his past (which will be completely revealed in the last episode) - so hopefully I can work out a way to really convey that without slowing down the story too much

I just uploaded a patch now that adds some more emotion and character to this episode. I think it develops Julius and the MC a little more

The character arcs are going to be really clear once the series ends I think, though obviously I'll need to go back and express that earlier on with a couple tweaks here and there. There's strong characters in there somewhere, I just need to boil them down kinda thing