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[DeMor's Tales - Chapter 1. KDM. (Episode 3)]

The main concept is getting a nice touch with that Book of Renunciation stuff in the beginning. But now I wonder, who is the Merchant, Rale or DeMor?

GregSargor responds:

Not a merchant. They are Meсhants (I suppose, from mechanism). People who create mechanisms and use anomalies.

[DeMor's Tales - Prologue. (Episode 1)]

Not bad! The English grammar and meaning are a bit jumbled, but I understood it well enough. Animation is simplistic and more suited to a game, but that's okay for your first submission. The story narration in the beginning actually was very original and interesting!

GregSargor responds:

Thank you! Sometimes It's difficult for me to find the right words, because English is not my primary language.

[Spirit Fist Episode 2]

I feel the story has slowed to a better pace this episode, nothing out of the blue. I wanted to see Jason or one of those ninja guys fight too! The intro of the class president was a little weird; does he stop all fights or does he take a liking to Derek immediately? The fight scene was good, though the explosions are a little stagnant, but that's fine. It makes it feel like time slows.

Enigmaproductions responds:

The role of the class president is to keep the peace and maintain order. So technically he has to stop as many fights as he can. Now he can't stop every single fight in the school that's why he commands a security force called the "Regulators" who will appear in Episode 4. And his second in command is his lieutenant and that character will also in Episode 4.

[Spirit Fist Episode 1]

Art's good. Animation isn't too bad. The pace is damn fast, and the script shows it. The story is promising, but it most likely will arise to something like West Side Story turf wars or XIN battle against authority. It needs something to really stand out. The character's seem ok, but I feel only Jason has real personality.

Enigmaproductions responds:

Lol someone else told me the pacing was fine. Anyway you should check out Episode 2.

[RWBY Animation - Death of Weiss Schnee Complete Edition]

DAAAMN, you totally absorbed me with the story! Wukong's abdominal art could be adjusted, but overall, the art is pretty good. The video speed should be sped up so it looks more animated.

maxell149 responds:

Thanks for the Feedback!!!

[Grimoire Official Trailer #1 - Vera]

How delightfully surreal and suspenseful! I love the characters and the voices. The animation and art is like Starr vs the Forces of Evil, but it fits! I really look forward to your development of this series! LOVE IT!!

StudioBXR responds:

Thanks so much! We really appreciate it :)

[Motion Portrait: Orient]

OH MY GOSH, THIS IS AWESOME!!! The music is an excellent touch and adds to the authentic feel. I laughed at that "Lazy American People" sign.

deathink responds:

Hahaha, yeah, thats a lil Easter egg.

[Hellami Animated Series Episode 3 "Bloodied"]

FINALLY! Crow's entrance was more or less predictably in fashion. I had been confused before, thinking Redies had a different disease from Sharks, but Redies merely become Sharks. this will probably be bought up later as the disease progresses I hope?

Black-Crystal responds:

The Sharks are the survived victims infected with Redies but the most of the victims usually died to the disease. The number of Sharks or the survived Redies victims have always been low. In later episodes, it will perhaps be clearer. :)

[Hellami Animated Series Special "Humming Becky"]

Nice scenery graphics. What tune is that? Can't wait for this shark to do something serious...

Black-Crystal responds:

The tune is from 'Call me Maybe'. I left it to the voice actress(Cayla Martin) to hum a random song and it turns out to be pretty fitting. Nice catch btw ;)

[Hellami Animated Series Episode 1 "Hellami"]

This is great! I'll admit, I thought the whole new thing would be in 3D. But I really like the feel I got from the old 2D shots too. I'm a little mixed as to how they come together. Keep up the good work!

Black-Crystal responds:

Yeah I expected that the 2d and 3d mix might be alittle weird but It will just take too much time for me to redo them into 3d. I decided that it's better for me to use my time for the new scenes. Seeing the big picture... And thanks for your compliments, glad that you enjoy it :D